An odd thing about writing erotica. Some guys have a natural flare for it, others struggle to create. What's ironic is that, often, the same guys who write a lot also have terrible writing skills - lousy spelling, lousy grammar, etc. They're kind of like idiot savants - they get the "hot part" right, and nothing else.
Since I paid attention in English class, I constantly find their misspellings and such to be an annoying distraction. As a result, I found myself editing their stories until I could read them without getting aggravated. On a couple of occasions I reached out to the authors via email and sent them my new version of their stories. In each case, the authors responded positively and with gratitude.
Boomer is one such author. I never met him but, in his emails, he was always a nice guy. He disappeared from the scene a decade or so ago but used to have a great flare for writing "impregnation" stories. Here is one I edited for him. Hope you enjoy!
Wife Whore
by Boomer
Part One
Hi my name is Jack. My wife is Janet and we are both 22 years old. We've been married for two years and although we've had the standard financial problems that all new couples have, I felt that what we had was very special.
Anyway, about six months ago we decided to invest all of our savings into a small business and try to make it as entrepreneurs. It was very tough, to say the least, and we began to ring up enormous bills. We found ourselves fighting about money a lot and I began to wonder if starting our own business was worth it after all.
Through it all, my friend Derek was by my side offering great advice on how to continue on. Derek is older than us by a couple of years. His parents died when he was 20 and left him a fortune. I could never go to Derek for money, even though he often offered. It used to piss my wife off that I would not accept his help but I have always wanted to do it on my own.
My wife Janet is a gorgeous, sexy woman and on numerous occasions Derek has told me that if I hadn't snatched her up, he would've. He flirts with her all the time, but she doesn't give him the time of day. She has told me that she thinks Derek is "an asshole with way too much time and money on his hands" but I knew she secretly enjoyed the attention he gave her. I could tell by her laughter while he was busy pouring on the charm.
Anyway, the real trouble began one day when I was scheduled to go out of town to meet with a supplier. While I was enroute to the airport, my cell phone rang. It was the supplier telling me that the meeting was off due to a scheduling conflict. I was pissed off as I turned the car around and headed for home.
When I got there, I was surprised to see Derek's car in the driveway. He usually didn't come around when I wasn't there, and he knew I'd be gone overnight. As I approached the door, I wondered why he would be over.
As I entered the house, I could hear Janet and Derek talking in the living room. I was about to announce myself when I heard Derek tell my wife, "With a body like that, you should be selling it." I stopped dead in my tracks, and hid nearby, curious to hear where this would lead. Then, I heard my wife gasp and what sounded like her giving him a playful punch to his shoulder.
Then there was only a brief pause before my wife coyly asked Derek if he really thought she could make money doing that. Derek stated, emphatically, "Fuckin' right you could! Any guy in his right mind would pay big bucks to get inside you!"
Then my wife blew my mind by asking, "What do they make?"
Derek told her, "The going rate is somewhere around $100 for a blowjob and $125-$150 for a fuck."
"Really?" she answered amazed. "To think I've been giving it away for free all this time!"
They both laughed.
Then she floored me by asking Derek, "Would YOU pay money to fuck me?"
"Would I?!" said Derek, "In a heart beat!"
"Would you use a condom?" she asked, "because I'm not on any kind of birth control."
"Of course," answered Derek, "although I personally don't like them. The guy usually pays more not to use them."
"How much more?" asked my wife.
"It depends," said Derek, "I'd pay $500 to fuck you without one."
"Right now?" asked my wife.
"Damn right," said Derek. I couldn't believe where this conversation was going, and I almost died when I heard the next words out of my wife's mouth.
"OK," she said, "you can fuck me without a condom for $1000. She paused, then added almost apologetically, "It's just that right now I'm ovulating and have a greater chance of getting pregnant, so like anything else, the higher the risk, the higher the reward."
"You drive a hard bargain," said Derek, laughing, "but here you are." I moved to where I could see the living room and could see my wife counting a wad of crisp bills.
"One other thing," she added, "if I do get pregnant then Jack must never know it's not his."
"Not a problem, Janet." I saw Jack move toward her and begin kissing her deeply on the mouth. Jack was very impatient, though. Quickly, he ripped her clothing from her body until she was naked before him. Then he dropped to his knees and spread her legs so that he could lick her pussy. Janet just moaned in response to his expert tongue. Then he stopped and pulled her down to the floor with him.
"Let's go to the bedroom," whispered Janet.
"No way," said Derek, "I've been fantasizing about fucking you for years so! I don't want to wait another minute." Derek quickly stripped naked too and his erection, which was quite a bit larger than mine, was already fully erect.
"Suck my dick, Janet!" he ordered. Immediately, my wife began to suck his cock with a vengeance. She rarely sucked my cock and yet, there she was, hungrily going to town on his big cock liike a total slut.
I couldn't believe this was happening and yet, I did absolutely nothing to try and stop it. In fact, I noticed my own cock was hard as rock. I watched as they coupled briefly in a 69 position until Derek broke it off, announcing that it was time he fucked her. Janet moved onto her back with her legs splayed apart, opening her tight cunt to his view, but Derek told her that he wanted her another way.
He guided my wife to her feet and then laid her over the arm of the sofa. Her face pressed into the cushions as he lined his cock up with her exposed cunt at waist level. I had to move fast to get into a better position to see this. From my new spot I could see Derek rubbing his bulbous cockhead up and down her slit, all the time asking my lovely wife if she was ready for him. I heard my wife tell him to fuck her hard. Then I saw him thrust his entire cock into her cunt in one thrust, while Janet groaned into the sofa cushion.
"God you're tight!" he told her, "No wonder Jack's so fuckin' happy all the time." He paused a moment to allow her pussy to adjust to his added girth. Then, he began to slowly fuck in and out of her. I could see her cunt lips clinging tightly to his shaft and withdrawing obscenely with every out stroke.
Before long, he was penetrating her deeply. As he did, his fingers moved down to manipulate her clit and soon she was writhing and responding with her first orgasm.
"Yeah cum for me baby!" he groaned as he began to fuck her even harder. Now he was hammering her like a madman and she was experiencing orgasm after orgasm. He announced that he was going to fill her full of his seed. He told her that he felt a baby in the making and that he was gonna plant it deep inside her whore womb.
My wife babbled something incoherent and then yelled, "Yes! YES! Give it to me! Give me a baby!"
"You asked for it bitch," he announced, burying himself deep inside of her.
I could see his balls squashed up against her ass as his cheeks pulsated with every blast of sperm he shot deep into her womb. "Here's a thousand bucks worth of bouncing baby bastard!" He laughed as he once again began to hump her, letting her cunt suck every last bit of his seed from his balls.
I could not believe my wife had just fucked my best friend, and that she had done it without a condom. Moments later, he pulled his cock from her well-fucked hole. It was obvious that he had cum a lot by the huge volume of sperm oozing from her still extended hole.
My wife turned over carefully, while cupping her hand over her vulva, trying her best to avoid getting any of my friend's sperm on the sofa. Next, her legs seemed to give out and she fell to her knees. Her face was flushed and glowing, and it was obvious that she had enjoyed herself as well.
Derek got dressed and asked, "So, how does it feel to be a whore, Janet?"
Janet was obviously embarrassed by the question and instead of answering, she just blushed and bowed her head.
Derek laughed at her act of submission. To test his theory, he bent down and stuck a finger into my wife's cunt. Then he scooped out some of his errant sperm and wiped it on her cheek. Derek smiled as Janet kept her eyes focussed on the ground, while allowing the gob of cum to passively drizzle down her face.
"Just remember," laughed Derek, "once I've given you a child, the rate goes down to $150 a fuck - of course, still without a condom, since by then we won't need one."
Janet just kneeled there, continuing to feebly nod her head.
At that point, I decided I had to get out of there ahead of Derek. I snuck out of the house, jumped into my car and went for a drive. As I drove around the neighborhood aimlessly, I wondered, what the hell was I gonna do now!
What would you do if you were me?
THE END
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